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The Jackal
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since 08-13-99
Posts 427
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S


0 posted 09-27-1999 01:19 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

im sorry to all
i am so bleak
depressing i fall
get a running start
before we hit the wall
i do not want to be so
i hope i dont make you sad
never my intention
happy i want
you all to truly be
but it is the way i see today
that creates
the bleak
view
if your unfortunate
just like haunting me
you might see the world
as i do
see it
feed it
as it eats away at you..




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Julie
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since 08-20-99
Posts 742
Houston, TX


1 posted 09-27-1999 01:41 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Jackal,
I am sorry your world is dark. It is up to
you to take off the dark glasses, for when you do you will find the sun is shining.
It just takes a little hope and a little
courage.
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I want you to know I think you are an excellent writer. If you choose to write
on sad subjects that is up to you and
I will continue to read your poetry either way. To know the world fully we must be
able to see the minds of other men...
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YES, I am sending you a Hug.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



The Jackal
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2 posted 09-27-1999 01:58 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Jackal

thank you very much julie,i appreciate it very much

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