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A daisy in the field (A pantoum)

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Seymour Tabin
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A daisy of the field (A pantoum)

And though pedestrian at best
A common daisy of the field
She rules the beat that's in my breast
Regardless of her humdrum wield.

A common daisy of the field
Just one of many of this earth
Regardless of her humdrum wield,
She is my only choice of worth.

Just one of many of this earth
She has the softness of a dove.
She is my only choice of worth.
Showers me with the girth of love.

She has the softness of a dove.
With the wit of a raconteur.
Showers me with the girth of love
And stories of a connoisseur.

With the wit of a raconteur
And though pedestrian at best
And stories of a connoisseur
She rules the beat that's in my breast.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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Nicely done Seymore
Julie
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Beautiful Seymour, flows so well.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-27-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot and Julie,
I thank you both for taking the time to read and comment on this work.
Denise
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4 posted 09-27-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Seymour. I admire all you talented people who can create these complicated pieces. It is certainly not easy! I get a headache just thinking about it! Again, well done!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-27-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dsnyder,
Once again I must thank you for your stop and read and comment.
Alwye
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6 posted 09-27-1999 10:23 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, beautiful work! I love pantoums. Wonderful flow.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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7 posted 09-28-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Alwye,
Enjoyed your comment, dsthank you
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He made it all look so easy.  This makes me smile.

Alison
 
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