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zipknee
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0 posted 09-27-1999 05:52 AM       View Profile for zipknee   Email zipknee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zipknee

the past is past
but yet it still encompasses me
surrounds me like a shroud
clouds of remembrance floating
like a heavy fog around me
blocking the view ahead
untouchable, unmovable, lingering
always haunting
© Copyright 1999 zipknee - All Rights Reserved
Kelly
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1 posted 09-27-1999 06:00 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Very very well done. I really like this. It's short and yet it says it all.
hoot_owl_rn
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Not a single wasted word....it speaks volumes although short
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Zipknee,
Good one I like it.
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ZipKnee~
Very enjoyable read.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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