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Mystic Moon (challenge from DarkAngel)

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-27-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Lovers' kiss is framed by the mystic moon.
By her light they drown in each other's eyes.
Intimate embraces cause hearts to swoon.
Passion is captured by the echoes of sighs.

By her light they drown in each other's eyes.
Around them rises night's enchanting song.
Passion is captured by the echoes of sighs.
Two hearts that beat as one cannot go wrong.

Around them rises night's enchanting song.
Warming desire holds back the chill air.
Two hearts that beat as one cannot go wrong.
Fingers tangle within each other's hair.

Warming desire holds back the chill air.
Whispered tenderness adds to the romance.
Fingers tangle within each other's hair.
Memory recalls each past lover's dance.

Whispered tenderness adds to the romance.
Each can taste the other upon their lips.
Memory recalls each past lover's dance.
With hunger and care to her his head dips.

Each can taste the other upon their lips.
Intimate embraces cause hearts to swoon.
With hunger and care to her his head dips.
Lovers' kiss is framed by the mystic moon.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-27-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 09-27-1999 02:40 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A well done pantoum, Dream. I am missing my Miss Mystic, even as we speak.

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Michael Anderson


Loneliness isn't in being alone;
Loneliness is alone in being.

Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-27-1999 03:20 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Wow, Soul-Brother, this is excellent, so beautifully written.I love it, Well Done !

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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3 posted 09-27-1999 08:32 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Beautifully written as always.Well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-27-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully romantic my friend
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5 posted 09-27-1999 09:19 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
You swing a wide loop. A beautiful Pantoum.
DreamEvil
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6 posted 09-27-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you.
Severn
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7 posted 09-27-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wonderful! Bravo! Roses and such thrown at feet....
Pepper
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8 posted 09-27-1999 06:46 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

gorgeous....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Balladeer
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9 posted 09-27-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Work created by a true craftsman of his art.
Mark4Him@juno.com
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10 posted 09-27-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Mark4Him@juno.com   Email Mark4Him@juno.com   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark4Him@juno.com


Beautiful form,clever,sensuous.I like it.
Soleil
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11 posted 09-27-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Soleil   Email Soleil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil

Ah, and one of my favorite images. A mystic moon.
Christopher
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12 posted 09-27-1999 09:36 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Ditto the above, including your thank you bro!
I have to try this style one of these days...
Alwye
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13 posted 09-27-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Definitely try it, Christopher. I love it.

Dream, phenomenal, as always. You know how much I enjoy this style, and you do it like no other. Great work, my friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


WhtDove
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14 posted 09-27-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This is exquisite Dream! Very well done, but all your work is like that!

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God gave you two ears and one mouth...so you should listen twice as much as you talk.
DreamEvil
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15 posted 09-29-1999 01:45 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you all much for the response to this piece.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Mystic Essence
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16 posted 09-29-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for Mystic Essence   Email Mystic Essence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic Essence

Wow..I am left breathless. Truly stunning work, DreamEvil.

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~
caroline
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17 posted 09-29-1999 10:31 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You have truly perfected this form, my friend. This is beauty itself.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Isis
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18 posted 09-30-1999 03:30 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

What's left for me to say?
Truly beautiful is what!!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Kelly
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19 posted 09-30-1999 03:51 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Another great one!
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