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More Dimensions Par 3 (For Christopher)

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Isis
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0 posted 09-27-1999 12:32 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


Before I journey on to the happy ones,
There are a few more intolerable one's I care to expand on,
Judgements, opinions whatever we call them,
For the bearer the pain may last long.

Racism, is one I can't abide,
Judging someone by their colour,
Eew he's Chinese don't want to know him,
Never glimpsing the possibilities inside.

Being judged by the way one looks,
She's too fat, too ugly or thin,
Again cos of the Judgement it's probable to say,
You'll never see the beauty within.

Picking on anyone for any number of reasons,
What does it achieve,
Look past the outbody and what you see,
In their heart and soul believe.

FOR CHRISTOPHER WANTED TO ADD THOSE COUPLE, I'LL DAY A HAPPY ONE TOMORROW I PROMISE. WHAT DO YOU THINK MY FRIEND?

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


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1 posted 09-27-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Another list of important things Isis!
I really liked the line:
"Look past the outbody..."
Great way to express it!
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