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responsive haiku (written with TH)

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Beki
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0 posted 09-26-1999 11:35 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

TH:

the music of love
a symphony of Spring
they play our song

Beki:

we play our own song
concerto for pen and ink
love's wonder our beat

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Flesh and blood, I am
every moon you've tried to tame -
I will be your poem.


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1 posted 09-26-1999 11:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful!

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-27-1999 08:25 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Beki,
I like what TH: said but is it a form of haiku?
Yours I understand and it is the season of
"LOVE." Enjoyed the read.
hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful
Beki
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4 posted 09-27-1999 09:17 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Thanks everyone. Seymour, TH and I were having a lengthy exchange about what haiku was and wasn't when we wrote these this past summer...I suppose his could be considered haiku, he did after all mention Spring :-)
 
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