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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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0 posted 1999-09-26 10:58 PM


(For Christopher)

Thankyou God -
for there must be one
or perhaps not
Anyway
I'm seeing only you
and any prayers
would soon divert
themselves,
turn into
desperate begging entreaties
skipping across
the continents
or maybe
even galaxies,
to wind up
flying headfirst
through a door
And there they'd
crash
straight into you
running
down a
stair
drinking your
beloved MtDew!

23.9.99 KM

!

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 09-26-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-09-26 11:04 PM


Caffeine is our friend! Cute one!

Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-09-26 11:11 PM


ROFLMAO!
A poignance mixed in with humoUr!
You are too sweet indeed my star!
(Now you've got me wanting to fall down those stairs, in the hopes that you will catch me!)

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-09-26 11:15 PM


Rest assured I would - after all, I'm not the only one with a skinny.....
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-09-27 07:50 AM


Severn,
Cute poem enjoyed the read.

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