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Severn
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0 posted 09-26-1999 10:58 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

(For Christopher)

Thankyou God -
for there must be one
or perhaps not
Anyway
I'm seeing only you
and any prayers
would soon divert
themselves,
turn into
desperate begging entreaties
skipping across
the continents
or maybe
even galaxies,
to wind up
flying headfirst
through a door
And there they'd
crash
straight into you
running
down a
stair
drinking your
beloved MtDew!

23.9.99 KM

!

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 09-26-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-26-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Caffeine is our friend! Cute one!
Christopher
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2 posted 09-26-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

ROFLMAO!
A poignance mixed in with humoUr!
You are too sweet indeed my star!
(Now you've got me wanting to fall down those stairs, in the hopes that you will catch me!)
Severn
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3 posted 09-26-1999 11:15 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Rest assured I would - after all, I'm not the only one with a skinny.....
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Severn,
Cute poem enjoyed the read.
 
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