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Autumn Visions

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 09-26-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Amber deeply emblazons an emerald vision,
Autumn brilliance painted upon the breeze.
Beauty dances with the early morning sun,
Flooding through dark, jewel toned leaves.

Boundless skies are feathered creamy white,
As fingertips of blue touch this vast meadow.
By your side I embrace the perfect sight,
And nurtured by our touch, true love does grow.

The flight of time seems so distant here,
Almost as if for us, the world has stilled.
I feel so complete when you hold me near,
A glance into your eyes and my soul is filled.

If love were a vision, it surely must be this,
Amber softly brushed upon deep emerald leaves.
Upon my soul, you have left your tender kiss,
And now my heart dances upon the painted breeze.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-26-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Absolutely beautiful! I enjoyed this. And autumn is my favorite time of year too!

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Denise
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2 posted 09-27-1999 08:21 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful.....this flows so smoothly and is filled with wonderful imagery

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Alwye
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3 posted 09-27-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you both very much. This was a real event I experienced a few days ago and I wished to capture it.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


DreamEvil
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4 posted 09-27-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Well done again my wayward friend.

I'm glad you chose to write about your experience.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Alwye
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Thank you, my dear Friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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6 posted 09-29-1999 09:43 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Alwye, absolutley beautiful

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Mystic Essence
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7 posted 09-29-1999 10:23 PM       View Profile for Mystic Essence   Email Mystic Essence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic Essence

Alwye, my friend, this is a wonderful piece. I can truly see your vision, for I've been there myself. I too love fall. Great great work!

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~
 
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