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What We've Become

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Lynn
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0 posted 09-26-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


What We've Become

We aren't what we used to be now.
We've altered and changed some how.
We began as no more than friends, and we've become no less than lovers.
What we've become is a total mistake.
One I never in my life thought I could make.
But I will always love you.
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-26-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, Lynn. Short and to the point and 'says it all'.

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2 posted 09-26-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like this, but is it a bad thing to fall in love with a friend? Not sure as I've never done it!
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3 posted 09-26-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for loverbaby   Email loverbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for loverbaby

i think that this was very impressive the way that you got your point out so clear and short....i loved can relate well....~*Niki*~
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4 posted 09-27-1999 06:54 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Great poem......
I fell in love with a friend of mine...
wasn't a bad experience for me, but I'm sure its different for every person.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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