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Lynn
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0 posted 09-26-1999 08:38 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


Never Again

His heart spoke to
me in the silence
of the wind.
Telling me that he
no longer wanted
me, that he no longer
loved me.
His eyes gazed
at me from a
distance, craving
me once more.
But, I wouldn't
put myself in
that situation.
Not now.
Not ever.
Not again.
I've fallen for
his eyes too many
times.
I won't allow
myself to get
lost in the passion
once more.
Not now.
Not ever.
Never Again....


[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 09-26-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-26-1999 08:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lynn, this is absolutely beautiful! Very nicely done!

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Denise
Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


2 posted 09-26-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Lynn, I too, once had that special someone
all I had to do is look at her, she was my
first wife. At one point in time, I loved her more than life itself. We divorced, and
boath had failed second marriages, one day she came back around, I was vulnerable, so
weak, she said she wanted to work it out
with me so that we could be together again.
she ended up running away with another man,
and my heart was broken once more.I agree
with you completely, wonderful poem!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 09-26-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lynn...a beautiful expression of your pain, the format works very well with this piece and it flows nicely
Alwye
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In the space between moments


4 posted 09-26-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow Lynn, wow....beautiful, powerful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 1121
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5 posted 09-26-1999 09:56 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

feels better now doesn't it??? to get it out.
Beki
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6 posted 09-26-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

From a place of pain to a place of strength is a great journey....glad you made it successfully...good poem!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
Dark Angel
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7 posted 09-26-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lynn, this is beautiful, well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 09-27-1999 07:39 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lynn,
You did a good job all around.
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