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Killed it again!!

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Isis
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since 09-06-99
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0 posted 09-26-1999 07:18 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


I'm dying!
My soul is being torn in two again,
I'm my own worst enemy,
Will I ever see the end?

The end of this yearning,
The end of killing that which is so dear,
I kill the love, hack it up and destroy it,
The picture is perfectly clear.

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 09-26-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Isis, what it is you think you're hacking apart? Why don't you give me an email and let me know what's up. ok?
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-26-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow...so few words, but so much said in this piece Isis
Artur Hawkwing
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3 posted 09-26-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

What's this actually about, mewonders? Is this about you being the one destroying your happiness? I think this is well-expressed in so few words....

Liking this one, as I like your other poems.

[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 09-26-1999).]
Severn
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4 posted 09-26-1999 09:23 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Don't die Isis! Seriously, this is great - very bold.
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