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Beki
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0 posted 09-26-1999 07:00 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

Your hand on my thigh,
Your mouth moving on my skin -
Forgotten pleasures!

Kiss after kiss,
My mouth on your mouth -
Whispering haiku!

Watching you sleep -
Cricketsong for lullaby,
My hand on your heart.



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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-26-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I'm glad to see you posted this here....as I said before, it is romantically beautiful!!

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Beki
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2 posted 09-26-1999 11:21 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Thanks Hoot, now I will move it back to the top so it doesn't get buried before others see it <>>
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-27-1999 08:02 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Beki,
I guess this is the season of love.
Beki
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4 posted 09-27-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

I think I explained in a response to one of your postings that the form of senyru was like haiku except that its subject was the nature of man rather than the nature of the universe. No seasonal references necessary as these are more properly senyru. I don't want to confuse you after the issue I made of your poem in the adult section, please feel free to ask anything else you want to know, the fact is the syllable count and the seasonal reference are among the least important features that make a poem haiku.
 
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