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Lelly Shae Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32 |
SIREN Along the uncertain lines of the salty,salty sea I first saw your eyes of sparkling golden green before me sharp like fire,strong and free-spirited like me. You were a trance,a siren,a sweet,exotic wine blended on the inside with a brazen current,lustful and fine and hiding an ancient allure forever untouched by time. You possesed a potent drug within your virile,adolescent face that took me by the heart and soul into some celestial place, redolent of the dreams that visit me,then leave without a trace. Such undying beauty you gave my lonely,unloved heart, a sanctuary for my life,an inspiration for my art and as we kiss with impassioned grace,we know that we must part I will keep in my mind your resplendent face and your lovely,soothing words, your voice will echo through my ears and though my despondent world. and your smile will stay with me forever,killing the woman inside the girl. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
How beautiful and yet sad at the same time... interesting story lelly! |
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Lelly Shae Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32 |
Thanks Christopher  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very sad and beautiful. I enjoyed reading this. ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very sad, but nicely done....the last line is a great finish!! |
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Lelly Shae Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32 |
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