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searchingsoul
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0 posted 09-26-1999 12:47 PM       View Profile for searchingsoul   Email searchingsoul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for searchingsoul


Oh so long since I've felt the doubt, worry and pain.
I just don't understand, why? why me again?
Are my dues not paid, my bridges not crossed?
how can hopes of love be suddenly tossed.
oh how I long to be carressed, loved and cherished, but to no avail I feel love has perished.
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Richard 33
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1 posted 09-26-1999 04:21 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Dear searching:

I can tell you from experience that I have
felt this way a million times before. I
also know that for someone to say that they
understand really isn't much help, words
are so inadequate. However ther is a few
words I can say that might help. Everytime
life deals me a hurt, I take it, and turn it around, and use it creatively, poetry is a
very good outlet. pain is all in how you
look at it, it can be destructive, or it can
be used to create beautiful works like the
one you have posted here.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-26-1999).]
Marilyn
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2 posted 09-26-1999 04:27 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I know where you have been and I feel your pain. There is always hope. Without hope we die. In death there is no joy. To know true happiness we must experience pain and loss. It is the only way we can truely accomplish extasy.
hoot_owl_rn
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Searching...I've been there before, keep your chin up. I like the way you stated this, may I make a minor suggestion to imporve the readibility?

Oh, so long since I've felt
doubt, worry and pain.
I just don't understand,
why? why me again?
Are my dues not paid,
my bridges not crossed?
how can hopes of love be suddenly tossed.
oh how I long to be carressed,
loved and cherished,
but to no avail...
I feel love has perished.



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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
searchingsoul
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4 posted 09-26-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for searchingsoul   Email searchingsoul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for searchingsoul

thanks for all your comments, it has been a long time since I've written any poetry, use to b my past time, I need some brushing up and appreciate any suggestions. I don't know why I ever quit as it is a great release.
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