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Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


0 posted 09-26-1999 11:18 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

There are still things I have not told you
These things I have not said
They are simple yet I want to say
You have treated me wonderfully
With so very much respect
You slowly get to know the inner side of me
You do not knock down my defenses or come crashing through the door
You care about my feelings
And everything I say
You have been such a joy to be around in each and every way
I did not think it possible
That you would touch my heart so soon
There are a few more things
I do not believe I've mentioned
I was scared to show you this love I have inside
I was caught off guard, quite surprised
By the way you glided into my life
But when I first talked with you and every other times we shared
Are the little things I so treasure
It is the little things I love
I was scared to tell you about me
But, something inside let me
Let you deep inside of me

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-27-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 09-26-1999 11:23 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Bleu, this was wonderful! How many times we are afraid to show what we feel and let someone in. I'm glad you found the strength.
Justbleu
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2 posted 09-27-1999 12:39 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

So very true Whtdove!! Thank You!!

Severn
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3 posted 09-27-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well done, bleu! Loved this - sounds like you could put it to music.
Justbleu
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4 posted 09-29-1999 03:54 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Cool!! I wonder what it would sound like!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon


5 posted 09-29-1999 04:28 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This is so moving! And it would sound great as music

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What you hid from your parents as kids, you will hide from your kids as parents. ~Cletus T Judd~


Dragoness
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6 posted 09-29-1999 06:21 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well done!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


7 posted 09-29-1999 03:33 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You both!!

Does anyone compose music around here??

LOL!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


8 posted 09-29-1999 03:34 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

What an excellent tribute to someone who's obviously very special to you... well done!
Michael
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9 posted 09-29-1999 03:36 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I know how wonderful it feels to be completely captivated like this. You are very lucky to be experiencing this.
Beautiful poem.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.


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