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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 09-26-1999 10:23 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Your Sun (written in joint effort with johnt300)

The muted waves lap alongside the wooden hulls
In their rhythm, my heart beats in tune with yours
I hear a gulls song off in the distance, hugging the land
The haunting cries echo my lonely cries to you
Another misty night gathers around my skin
And I breathe it in, wanting it to fill this longing inside
With each breath, I draw you, draw the sun, a little closer
I long to be cloaked by your body, warmed by your light
As the moon surrenders, losing her fight
And I am risen in your sun


Tyson...thanks for being my light and my inspiration

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-26-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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1 posted 09-26-1999 11:15 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

gorgeous Hoot......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
WhtDove
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2 posted 09-26-1999 11:20 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hoot, you guys do just beautifully together. Another wonderful piece!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-26-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Pepper....thank you

Whtdove...it comes so easily when we write together, effortlessly the words flow

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 09-26-1999 04:46 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hoot & John: That's exactly as it should be..

HUGS both

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


5 posted 09-26-1999 04:49 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Wunnerful job you two... amazing what two people can do together!
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 09-26-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Smiling...Rainbow....thank you.....Hugs

Christopher....isn't it though?? Thanks

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Alwye
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In the space between moments


7 posted 09-26-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Ooh, beautiful work, hoot. This is definitely how it should be. I loved it.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Severn
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8 posted 09-26-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow - this is stunning, you two. Awesome joint effort!
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 09-26-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Thank you so much alwye and Severn
Beki
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10 posted 09-26-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Very beautiful Hoot, especially like
"Another misty night gathers around my skin
And I breathe it in, wanting it to fill this longing inside
With each breath, I draw you, draw the sun, a little closer
I long to be cloaked by your body, warmed by your light"
WOnderful imagery!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
Dark Angel
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11 posted 09-26-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hoot & John, this is beautiful, absolutley!
well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


johnt300
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12 posted 09-27-1999 04:54 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Ruth,
I finally have a chance to reply to our poem here. This is my favorite of ours to date. And it came so quickly and easily. Thanks for always complimenting my lines perfectly, every time. Take care until this morning when we talk.

Pepper, WhtDove, Rainbowgirl, Christopher, Alwye, Severn, Beki, Dark Angel,
Thank you all for you replies. Very much appreciated by us both. Thanks again.
Tyson
Michael
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13 posted 09-27-1999 05:25 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

You two are the perfect compliment for eachother. Blesssings.

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Michael Anderson


Loneliness isn't in being alone;
Loneliness is alone in being.

hoot_owl_rn
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Beki and dark angel...thank you both for your wonderful comments on this one

Tyson...it just so hapens to be my favorite of ours too. I love writing with you

Michael...what a nice thing to say, thank you
johnt300
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15 posted 09-27-1999 09:35 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Michael,
That definitely is a great reply. Thank you.
Tyson
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