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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 09-26-1999 01:06 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Happiness
something that makes us smile

Sadness
a state that lets us think

Fear
this makes us numb for a while

Hurt
a thing that makes us drink

Passion
something that makes us feel

Romance
a way that we express

Trust
the test that makes us real

Withdrawal
this leads to lonliness

Uncertainty
this is what lets us learn

Worry
something that makes it worse

Betrayal
a thing that makes us burn

Nervous
this is how we feel at first

Need
this will teach what comes next

Want
tests with what we do not need

Togetherness
always brings out the best

Bettering
a book we need to read

Love
(see all the above)

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
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Paul Allen Lupien
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1 posted 09-26-1999 01:55 AM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

I like this! it's cooly profound and the ending was great.Love does do all that.

Affirmatively,

PAL

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Christopher
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2 posted 09-26-1999 05:01 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Neato!
Like what you did here, very clever and well prepared!
Dark Angel
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3 posted 09-26-1999 05:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is very clever, enjoyed it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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4 posted 09-26-1999 08:26 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

so true...so true
ThUnDeRkYsS
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5 posted 09-26-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Much thanks to you all for your input I tried something new here, thought it was sort of different so I decided to see what sort of replies I got. I love coming up with new ideas, and all your comments are greatly appreciated. Once again, Much thanks to each of you
ThUnDeRkYsS
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6 posted 09-27-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

So many questions, and where do we go? Maybe someday I will learn.
 
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