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Moonlight Sonata (haiku)

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Tara Simms
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Song of the crickets,
a symphony to my ears,
moonlight sonata.


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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

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1 posted 09-25-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent! You are way ahead in these challenges! I have to run to catch up!
hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful!!

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Tara Simms
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PDV, this is the only challenge I'm going to do. The rest are too exhausting and restrictive.

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

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Beki
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4 posted 09-27-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

This was very nicely done...I use crickets a lot in my own haiku, as did the old masters. Here is one of my favorites of my own:

Sudden silence
so deep even crickets
hesitate.

also....

An early frost,
and just one cicada
to sing me to sleep.

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5 posted 09-27-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

EXCELLENT JOB, TARA.
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In the space between moments


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Pure Beauty...

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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