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Isis
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0 posted 09-25-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


This is one of my favourite poems felt like reposting it again..

How can I describe it?
This meeting of the minds?
An awkward moment, a stolen glance,
A shred of happiness to find.

A diversion from the everyday,
Laughter shared, a walk down memory lane,
All problems seem so far away,
Happiness again, no quarells, no pain.

But can these feelings last?
Are they real or a dalliance?
Seeking something from one another,
Should we give these feelings a chance?

It's all so new this thing between us like a newborn doe,
Or perhaps dawn's first rays of light?
It's kind of overwhelming too,
But God it feels so right.

Do we give into these feelings these memories?
Or should they be put back on the shelf?
To be dusted off and remembered
When I'm all by myself?

This thing between us is oh so fragile,
Like a flower teased open by the sunlight.
Only time will tell if our feelings are real,
And not a phantom in the night...


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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


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Pepper
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1 posted 09-25-1999 11:48 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

the sweetness and uncertainty of new love you have painted well...lovely Isis......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Denise
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2 posted 09-25-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Isis. This is one of my favorites of yours also!

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-25-1999).]
Isis
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3 posted 09-26-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks Pepper and Denise, I just love this poem, can't tell you why...:.

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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4 posted 09-26-1999 08:14 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice Isis and I can understand why

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
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