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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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0 posted 1999-09-25 07:04 PM



Father sighed,
Mother cried.
First son, Johnny,
For ten bucks died.


Alicat

© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-25 07:16 PM


Very very sad.

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Denise

caroline
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2 posted 1999-09-25 07:29 PM


Potent

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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3 posted 1999-09-25 07:34 PM


so sad when put into such simple terms.
Life's like that, so fleeting...

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-09-26 09:39 AM


so sad....amazing what kids will hold up a store for , rob another for, risk their lives for
well written, not a wasted word

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

moonmoon
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5 posted 1999-09-26 03:24 PM



So much said with so little words Ali..The sadness lingers...

Thanks for the read..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr



Munda
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6 posted 2000-03-05 11:02 AM


Last but not least nr 38
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