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Daddy's Girl

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Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue oce


0 posted 09-25-1999 08:23 AM       View Profile for Deb Lynne   Email Deb Lynne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Deb Lynne

The sunshine breaks and spills its light
Across the quiet darkened day
A tiny star gives one last spark
Before letting morning have its way

The quietness of sleeping sounds
Is broken as nature begins to stir
And sleepiness calls you back to bed
For a few more moments next to her

You snuggle in and tuck her close
Beneath the comfort of your arm
That has a way of letting her know
She's protected from any harm

The night creatures don't stand a chance
No more bad thoughts will she dream
She knows she's safe where she lays
Her and her Daddy are a team
© Copyright 1999 Deb Lynne - All Rights Reserved
johnt300
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1 posted 09-25-1999 08:27 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Just beautiful. Very poigniant (sp?). Thank you for sharing this one. Touching.
Tyson
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla


2 posted 09-25-1999 08:30 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Deb,
Good subject, nice rhyme and well stated. Enjoyed the read.
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 09-25-1999 08:34 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

How sweet, and beautifully written. Treasure those times they pass so quickly.
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 09-25-1999 10:01 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful and very touching....thanks for sharing

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Pepper
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5 posted 09-25-1999 10:14 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very touching Deb...left me all warm and fuzzy....great work

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Julie
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since 08-20-99
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6 posted 09-25-1999 07:46 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

This one made me feel so warm inside.
You did a GREAT job relaying the feeling.


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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Denise
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7 posted 09-25-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sweet! Reminds me of my granddaughter, Nicole and her Pop-Pop!

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Denise
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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8 posted 09-30-1999 12:19 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That is sweet...I can relate to this...I will always be my daddy's girl!! I liked this a lot!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


Balladeer
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9 posted 09-30-1999 12:31 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Precious, Deb.
 
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