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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


0 posted 09-25-1999 01:53 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

Like the kiss of
death,
rain falls

d
-r
--i
-p
---p
--i
----n
-g

on my heart

Fragile,
pale, hopeless.
Still, lifeless, empty.

bitter songs...
empty air...
timeless ache...

No hope.

With the
darkness,
comes confirmation.
With the
light,
comes pain.

with the onslaught,
of awareness,
comes...

not you...

I
am

alone.

© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 09-25-1999 02:00 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

First I must say you're not alone in any way other than physically. Second - I really like the way you shaded your words...It intrigues me how colors identify with our emotion so well.


Michael
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2 posted 09-25-1999 02:06 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

You are not alone at all my friend. I find myself drawn to your use of color as well.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 09-25-1999 02:13 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I love the dramatic poem with the dramatic format and colors! Presentation is wonderful!
caroline
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4 posted 09-25-1999 02:15 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Christopher this is a little work of art, here Enjoyed the read and the visual on this.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Beki
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5 posted 09-25-1999 02:49 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Lovely piece Christopher both visually and aurally...how do you do that? I need someone to teach me things like color and changing fonts.......love this
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 09-25-1999 03:44 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Christopher: I know what I feel when I read this and the only thought that goes through my head is 'share a hug with me?' Hope is opening your eyes, thinking that next thought, taking that next step..little things, but all mean you have hope..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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7 posted 09-25-1999 10:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well presented Christopher

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 09-25-1999 11:30 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Thank you all, the hugs and camaderie are dearly appreciated. As Balladeer said earlier and I'm sure many others have before...this is my family, a home away from home. Dysfunctional, arguementative, but also supportive and caring.
All of you mean the world to me, and will live forever in my heart!

Chris
Denise
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9 posted 09-25-1999 11:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, Chris! This is truly a work of art!

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Denise
Julie
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10 posted 09-26-1999 12:46 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I second that, the colors but the format
was just as important to the feeling being
conveyed...very alluring.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Severn
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11 posted 09-26-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Amazing. The coloUrs are so great! Tch tch, bit too depressing - I'll have to 'slap' you out of it!
Marilyn
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12 posted 09-26-1999 09:30 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Wonderful. I feel it in my soul. I know excatly the aloneness of which you speak.
passing shadows
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13 posted 04-18-2004 02:37 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

awesome piece!
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