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I Agree With Nochtdraco~~ Paradelle's Bite...hehe

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Lucie
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0 posted 09-25-1999 12:25 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Hollow wind throughout the halls
Hollow wind throughout the halls
Echoes in my mind and soul
Echoes in my mind and soul
In my hollow mind and soul
wind echoes throughout the halls.

In the embittered silence of loneliness
In the embittered silence of loneliness
The fear of abandonment hovers
The fear of abandonment hovers
Loneliness hovers in fear of silence
the abandonment of the embittered.

Extreme emotion dies with age
Extreme emotion dies with age
Innocence stolen with truth
Innocence stolen with truth
Age stolen with extreme truth
innocence dies with emotion.

Innocence dies in embittered silence
stolen with fear of truth.
With age hovers extreme loneliness
the abandonment of emotion.
The hollow echoes of wind throughout
the halls in my mind and soul.

AAAAAHHHHH I did a crappy job! And I am never doing this again...DreamEvil made me do it!! hahahah I could fix it.. but I don't have enough energy!
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1 posted 09-25-1999 02:06 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

I DISAGREE Lucie, I loved this.
Especially innocence stolen with truth!
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2 posted 09-25-1999 02:07 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

You did well, Lucie. I knew you would.

Paradelles are fun!
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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ



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3 posted 02-20-2011 06:05 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Another good one.

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