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Another special one for Echo

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Richard 33
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since 09-09-99
Posts 197
glen easton, wv usa


0 posted 09-24-1999 10:25 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richard 33

If I could I would take the worlds weight off
your shoulders.

If I could I would cry all the tears so that
you are never sad again.

If I could I would take the burden of your
pain.

If I could I would take all of the shame so
that you would punish yourself never more.

I can tell you that I do understand.

I can tell you that you are loved by many.

I can tell you that I will be there for you.

I can ask you to please hold on.

I can say that I would be hurt if you were
gone.

I can tell you that you have brothers, and
sisters here "that have been there" that
love you, and that care!!!

To lose you, and your endless beauty that
dwells inside would be a shame.

I pray that you hang on.

I say this prayer in God's name!!!!
© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


1 posted 09-25-1999 01:12 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Aswe all do...

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 09-25-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful and touching Richard...she will appreciate I'm sure

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
 
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