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Isis
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0 posted 09-24-1999 07:55 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


We live in a world of dimensions,
Too many perhaps to see,
We all have our variances,
Right down to how we chose to be..

Like standing at the limit of an endless ocean,
Feeling like a runaway lost at sea,
Or a rainy day down by the water,
Watching as they grey clouds shadow the bay.

You can hear the wind in the mountains,
Telling stories some yet untold,
Then the feelings of strength and courage,
You'd forgotten you could be this bold.

A love of beauty, Nature's gift that you cherish,
The sweet smell of Spring in the air,
Sharing yourself with others,
Telling your innermost secrets if you dare.

There are of course the dark dimensions too,
Your personal fears and horrors,
Your nightmares that may plague you,
Despair when there seems there is nothing you can do.

Each of us have these and many more
unmapped streets,
So many quests to take,
Face them all with courage, wisdom and a true and loving heart,
And a life of happiness you will make..

I'M NOT CRAZY ABOUT THIS ONE..BUT HERE IT IS........


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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
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1 posted 09-26-1999 12:19 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I love this one, Isis. Great thoughts and sentiments. I especially love the part about the ocean. My favorite spot in all the world. And this is my favorite time to go! Maybe one of these weekends!

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Denise
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2 posted 09-26-1999 01:17 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks Denise, the rhythm and that isn't too good in this one, but I still thought the sentiments made it worth posting!!.:.

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Christopher
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3 posted 09-26-1999 04:47 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Definitely worth posting!
Too many people, IMHO (thanks Ron for that one BTW,) are not able to look past their very noses and realize that indeed, there are many "dimensions" to every facet of life!
A challenge Isis- I would really like to see an expanded viewpoint on this, perhaps a sequel or an addition to this one!
Christopher

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4 posted 09-26-1999 04:51 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful... I'm glad you posted it!
Isis
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5 posted 09-26-1999 06:17 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

OK Christopher I'll see what I can do..no promises it'll be any good though!..:..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


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