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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-24-1999 06:05 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

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Time capsules hang high and tall.
Upheld and brood on my wall.
Points of paint induced to meld
All products of my enthrall.

Brought to a myopic bed.
Mental gold turned into lead.
Captured pigments strokes of weld
Dimensions compressed to wed.

Phantom prisoners wrought in draw.
Brushed and held in pigments store.
Soul searched findings caught and held
Gelded here forever more.

Memory's to defeat times call.
Only ghosts can hang a wall.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 09-24-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Geesh, Sy - You've got some pretty interesting walls there...
Michael
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2 posted 09-25-1999 02:43 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

It got ten degrees colder in here reading this...quite chilling. I feel like I'm being watched now, good work.

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3 posted 09-25-1999 09:40 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
Like the old saying goes, you'll have to come up and see my paintings some time.
Michael,
Since your so close to the fire now, I guess this poem would seem cold.
Thank you both so much for the responce.
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4 posted 09-25-1999 01:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another interesting piece to make me think! Very well done!

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5 posted 09-25-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dsnyder,
I must thank you for your comment. I do turn on the air conditioning once in a while.
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6 posted 09-25-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gee, I thought with that title, it was going to be about milk. Was I wrong!

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