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Nicole
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0 posted 09-24-1999 04:20 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

My rhyme is less than perfect
-Leaving much to be desired
I struggle with each subject
-‘Till my mind is raw and tired
In writing, it is my weakness
-In life, I have many more
But all to you, I did confess
-In comfort, as never before
I want to write sweet verse
-That profess my feelings true
Of souls o’er lifetimes traverse
-And auras harmonizing in hue
Could I tell you my love does soar
-With the eagles ruling the sky?
That it shakes my very core
-Knowing to me, you soon will fly?
Truly you are my better half
-Completing me in every way
And with you, I love to laugh
-Together, as we pass each day
Oh, surely you must be told
-The color of your hair
Be it brown, or be it gold
-Of this, I’ve little care
‘Tis the one inside I see
-Your light outshines the brightest sun
Its warmth washes over me
-I stand helpless…my heart you’ve won

And though my verse is a little rough
Only half fault to that is due
Simply because, there aren’t words strong enough
To express my love for you
© Copyright 1999 Nicole Adams - All Rights Reserved
Alicat
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1 posted 09-24-1999 04:21 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Nay, sweet Satiate...you are my better half, and we could probably debate this point until the end of time, refilling each others coffee cups out of the sheer joy of serving the other. Thank you for struggling so very hard with this one...I know is was tough for you. And I love you. You are my soul's desire and completion. Thank you for being who you are.


Alicat, the long-tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs.

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 09-24-1999).]
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2 posted 09-24-1999 04:36 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

As I have repeatedly said, I'm a voyeur and I admit it.

Enjoy yourselves!

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

caroline
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3 posted 09-25-1999 11:41 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Satiate this is wonderful! Much happiness to you and Alicat



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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Michael
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4 posted 09-25-1999 12:05 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Satiate,
If in refining our poetry we fail to express the heart, then the poetry becomes rough. The is a beautiful and warming tribute.

Michael
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5 posted 09-25-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Another one bit by the love bug! Evidently, I'm wearing insect repellent!

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/

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6 posted 09-25-1999 01:44 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Your poem is perfect, because it's written from your heart. It's wonderful to see the love shining through your words!
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