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Kill It

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Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
Posts 1312
That place with padded walls a


0 posted 09-24-1999 02:18 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

You love me
I want to abort the fetus of your affection
And keep it in a jar
Fresh formaldehyde to kill the infection
Kill your bliss
I want to take your affection, wrap it in wire
End its evolution
Before it grows withered and old and tired
Before it dies
Before it rots as it sees its own stupidity
Kill it
Before it realizes this montstrous piece of humanity
Is the fuel of its fire
Kill it
Before you hate me

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
© Copyright 1999 Systematic Decay - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 09-24-1999 04:31 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Despite the tone of this poem, it is extreamly well written. The symbolism is excellent and it flows very well. I can't say as I agree with your sentiments, but I've been there a time or two before and understand where you are coming from.

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Star Fairy 2
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since 09-06-99
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cerritos, california, usa


2 posted 09-24-1999 06:30 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

wooooo
i loved it
very much so actually




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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--
DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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3 posted 09-24-1999 07:44 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Your verse describes the feelings and situation well. Lovely verse, by the way.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

 
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