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Challenge to all...I dare you..*g*

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 09-24-1999 12:14 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Yesterday was way too sad
so today I want us all to smile
Toerag can even be really bad (ooops)
Come on, let's be versatile

The challenge I'm tossing oops I meant giving
is to write a poem in freeverse or rhyme
about a poet from here who can be forgiving*g*
and I'm gonna start with DeVine...

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DeVine in poetry and kind to one and all
smashing to talk to and extremely witty
I have no idea if she's short or tall
or even if she's fat, thin or pretty

DeVine has something called style
and she really makes me laugh
I have to peek in once in a while
To read all the latest
from this 'DeVine' member of staff

Now I know Toerag will probably do 'Deer'
raise my eyes to the ceiling
as I think to myself "oh dear"
but I'm sure he'll do his usual
and have us all squealing
with tales of poor 'Deer's' sheepish rear

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-24-1999).]
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1 posted 09-24-1999 12:30 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'd rather kick back, relax, admire
Perhaps pour fuel on some fire
Than sit and struggle with some verse
Mumble, grumble, bitch and curse.
Many here are quite inspiring
But I don't care much for perspiring
To demonstrate my admiration
I have subjects, lack dedication!
RainbowGirl
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2 posted 09-24-1999 12:34 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern: You think maybe 'Deers' rear may need some help?..*g*

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 09-24-1999 01:24 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I am so flattered that you chose to write about me!! Thank you so much. Of course it's a wonderful poem - even if the subject matter (me) is a little weird!
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 09-24-1999 04:27 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Flattered????...and so you should be..*g*..LOL

HUSG PDV

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


5 posted 09-25-1999 04:31 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Now this may surprise some...ok, prolly allof you , but I am choosing Dream Evil...and Ill tell you why in a poem
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