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Toerag
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Ala bam a


0 posted 09-24-1999 11:57 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

And
Just around the corner
Lying in the street
dead,
with baby seat broken
on its side
a supermarket basket,
killed by the wind

(This is your brain........this is your brain on drugs.....

see above)
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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-24-1999 12:19 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Definitely cracked..*g*

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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on the threshold of a dream


2 posted 09-24-1999 12:22 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Please do not wait for me to mourn
For I have all too often borne
The great expense of painting scratches
With paint that rarely ever matches
The original color of my car.
Those darn carts shouldn't roll so far!

Great poem, Toe!!! The buggy may be my friend... but I hold grudges! *G*
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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3 posted 09-24-1999 01:12 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Toe, you doin ok today buddy? Short and thinkers they are.
WhtDove
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4 posted 09-24-1999 02:42 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ok, I am embarrased! As I was off doing other things, it hit me. Maybe it was the drugs I did years ago! lol All of a sudden this just clicked, and I understood! Or maybe you're in rare form today and making my brain think too hard! heheh....Actually quite a good little message you left there!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-24-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Drinking a few to many of those Fosters are we
Actually, it takes talent to write about shopping carts...perhaps you'll create a new line of poetry for Shopping Market ads...never know. This is a thought provoking piece.

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Andrew Scott
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6 posted 09-24-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Toe! I refuse to think... (but that was cool!)
Isis
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7 posted 09-24-1999 08:36 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Don't want to try and fathom it without a chemical helper........: Too deep for me today.

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Nan
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8 posted 09-24-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

... um...
Shopped til it dropped?... from cart-iac arrest???

Geesh - *slapping self* - I should really give Toe a serious response here.....

Nah - On second thought - Should we try cart-iac resuscitation??..
 
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