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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And Just around the corner Lying in the street dead, with baby seat broken on its side a supermarket basket, killed by the wind (This is your brain........this is your brain on drugs..... see above) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Definitely cracked..*g* HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Please do not wait for me to mourn For I have all too often borne The great expense of painting scratches With paint that rarely ever matches The original color of my car. Those darn carts shouldn't roll so far! Great poem, Toe!!! The buggy may be my friend... but I hold grudges! *G* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe, you doin ok today buddy? Short and thinkers they are. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
ok, I am embarrased! As I was off doing other things, it hit me. Maybe it was the drugs I did years ago! lol All of a sudden this just clicked, and I understood! Or maybe you're in rare form today and making my brain think too hard! heheh....Actually quite a good little message you left there! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Drinking a few to many of those Fosters are we  Actually, it takes talent to write about shopping carts...perhaps you'll create a new line of poetry for Shopping Market ads...never know. This is a thought provoking piece. ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Toe! I refuse to think... (but that was cool!)  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Don't want to try and fathom it without a chemical helper........: Too deep for me today. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... um... Shopped til it dropped?... from cart-iac arrest??? Geesh - *slapping self* - I should really give Toe a serious response here..... Nah - On second thought - Should we try cart-iac resuscitation??.. |
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