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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-24-1999 11:22 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Where once

Where once her presence filled the air,
Now just sets an empty chair.
Where once there rang the dinner sound,
Now the silence is profound.

Where once a scent did fill the room,
Now the scent, a bloom less bloom.
Where once her vibrants moved the light,
Now lies coldness and the night.

Where once played footsteps on the floor,
Quiet now the portal door.
Where once her love in full rapport,
Silent now forever more.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-24-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Seymore...masterfully written and hauntingly beautiful yet sad.

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-24-1999 12:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I'm with hoot Seymour, Hauntingly beautiful yet sad. Well Done

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Pepper
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3 posted 09-24-1999 12:39 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oh my.....very sad, I could feel the pain of such a loss.....as always beautifully written

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-24-1999 05:31 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot, Dark Angel and pepper,
My thanks for your kind words. I do look forward to all your comments. Thank you again.
Denise
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5 posted 09-25-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful and sad. Very well written!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-25-1999 02:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dsnyder,
It was so nice of you to resurrect me.
Thank you for the read and coment.
caroline
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7 posted 09-25-1999 08:03 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Seymour, this is as beautiful as it is painful. Great writing, friend


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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
graham
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8 posted 09-25-1999 08:37 PM       View Profile for graham   Email graham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for graham

Perfect verse..as ever Seymour!

Class...that I hope I (and others) will learn from.

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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 09-25-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Caroline and Graham,
Wonderful comments I thank you so much.
snow in summer
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Really Enjoyed.
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 09-28-1999 11:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Snow,
Sad poems are not always enjoyable but I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
passing shadows
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oh I love your sad ones!
 
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