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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where once Where once her presence filled the air, Now just sets an empty chair. Where once there rang the dinner sound, Now the silence is profound. Where once a scent did fill the room, Now the scent, a bloom less bloom. Where once her vibrants moved the light, Now lies coldness and the night. Where once played footsteps on the floor, Quiet now the portal door. Where once her love in full rapport, Silent now forever more. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore...masterfully written and hauntingly beautiful yet sad. ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm with hoot Seymour, Hauntingly beautiful yet sad. Well Done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh my.....very sad, I could feel the pain of such a loss.....as always beautifully written ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Dark Angel and pepper, My thanks for your kind words. I do look forward to all your comments. Thank you again. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and sad. Very well written! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, It was so nice of you to resurrect me. Thank you for the read and coment. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Seymour, this is as beautiful as it is painful. Great writing, friend ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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graham Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60South Yorkshire, England |
Perfect verse..as ever Seymour! Class...that I hope I (and others) will learn from. ------------------ I always wanted an edible canoe but you can't have your kayak and eat it too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Caroline and Graham, Wonderful comments I thank you so much. |
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snow in summer Member
since 1999-08-28
Posts 67 |
Really Enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snow, Sad poems are not always enjoyable but I'm glad you enjoyed this one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I love your sad ones! |
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