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I Was Lifted Up On Angels Wings (Achallenge by WhtDove)

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-24-1999 06:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

I Was Lifted Up On Angels Wings


I've soared past mountains steep
Through old valleys wide
Over great oceans deep
With an Angel by my side.
I was lifted up on Angels wings
And how it shook me about
I saw the rains and floods
Dry lands and drought.
Through villages of old
Suffering despair
Where people were sold
For the rich….
They were made to care.
Hunger in the eyes of children
No energy to even speak
The new world we must travel to
Volunteers we shall seek.
I was lifted up on Angels wings
So that I would understand
How lucky I am
To live in this time
And on this land.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-24-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-24-1999 06:13 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Rocking rhyme, my dear. Makes me glad for my place if not my time.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-24-1999 06:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Soul-Brother me too.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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3 posted 09-24-1999 07:50 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Geez D.A. Very heartfelt piece. Lots of meaning! You did a terrific job. I really liked this one!
Poet deVine
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4 posted 09-24-1999 09:57 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Good one! An Angel to help us see what the world needs! Very good!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-24-1999 10:18 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dark Angel,
Good subject and rhyme. Nice job.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 09-24-1999 11:15 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

You lived up to the challange well...nice work!!

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Dark Angel
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7 posted 09-24-1999 12:31 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove,Poet,Seymour and hoot, thank you for your lovely comments, I do appeciate them

WhtDove,thanks for the challenge

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Pepper
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8 posted 09-24-1999 03:17 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

loved where you went with this Dark Angel.....great job....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Dark Angel
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9 posted 09-24-1999 07:13 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Pepper, thanks so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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