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I was lifted up on Angel's wings - challenge from WhtDove

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 09-24-1999 05:01 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Life is full of magic
the highs and lows
tho' sometimes tragic
depends on what you know

Yesterday started well
Till I read of Echo Rhayne
on her life I started to dwell
thinking of joy and pain

Sunset arrived and departed
my thoughts dipped with the sun
I couldn't be light-hearted
losing track of any fun

The pain I felt sought release
my fingers typed my emotions
seeking solace needing peace
causing panic and commotion

To bed I went to shift my mind
to dream of better places
let loose and unrefined
images of charm and grace

In peace my heart started to sing
as I travelled through time and space
I was lifted up on Angel's wings
made of gossamer and lace...


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 09-24-1999 06:31 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is really beautiful RainbowGirl, well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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2 posted 09-24-1999 07:53 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Very, very nice Rainbow! You describe well how I think a lot of us felt yesterday!
(((hugs)))
Poet deVine
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3 posted 09-24-1999 09:56 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Just like your heart, this is simply beautiful!
WhtDove
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This deserves to be on top again!
Pepper
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you said it so well Rainbow....beautifully done....hugs

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 09-24-1999 05:00 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you all...it did bring some painful memories back but writing gets it out of my system, so to speak..:-)

HUGS all

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Starith
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7 posted 09-24-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Rainbow you have done it again. Simply beautiful.

Star

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Isis
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8 posted 09-24-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You thy mistress hath undoubtedly won the challenge, well done!!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


RainbowGirl
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9 posted 09-25-1999 03:31 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you Starith and Isis..:-)

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Michael
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10 posted 09-25-1999 06:58 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

RainbowGirl, This was simply beautiful and touching. I found the last stanza was breathtalking, in itself.

Michael
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11 posted 09-25-1999 06:17 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you Michael.. Guess there's no denying when the heart writes the words and the fingers are simply instruments...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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