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A far, far away land

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Artur Hawkwing
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0 posted 09-24-1999 04:35 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Another poem that I wrote two years ago, during my time of wonders.
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When the years roll by like the stars,
The ground is darkened by passing clouds
In this aerial peacefulness, winds blow forevermore
Earthly eyes are very few, long to come
The calmness makes one want to cry.
It's such that even the barren soil
Is full of ancient wonders---
The clouds can be heard rolling past
One feels as young as the ocean waters
Yet as old as the stars that shine brightly.
It's a lonely world but a happy one
Lie on the grass and you can sleep---
There's no sorrow in laughing or crying
Nor is there the sadness in happiness,
For the seraphim are your best friends.
This is a land of God I've often dreamed about!
The ethereal love is divine from one so high,
It is unimaginable yet imaginable,
It is unwritable yet writable.
So sovereign is this world it's distant
Yet so close when felt in the heart.
The days of renown old.
I still wonder.

[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 09-24-1999).]
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-24-1999 04:39 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Twould indeed be nice to have such dreams. I will leave them to you as my reality is both and nightmare and, currently, dream enough.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Tinfang Gelion
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since 09-23-1999
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2 posted 09-24-1999 03:09 PM       View Profile for Tinfang Gelion   Email Tinfang Gelion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tinfang Gelion

This is a well-written poem, great for a peaceful dream, if that is what it might be.

[This message has been edited by Tinfang Gelion (edited 09-24-1999).]
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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3 posted 09-24-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Superb! And I'll say it again my friend,
your work OUTSHINES my childish hyroglyphics (?) undoubtedly and every time!! Told ya!!:

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


 
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