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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-09-24 01:51 AM


The bitter taste of lust in your kiss chokes me.
The vileness of your desire makes me sick.
The only hope I have before I turn emotion off
is that tonight for once that you will make it quick.

I can not stand the knowing way you look at me.
I dream of someday hurting you just the same.
I believe that there’s a God around here somewhere.
How could he allow me to share this monster’s name.

When you looked upon my face the day that I was born,
were you glad I was a daughter and not a son?
Or perhaps it was the other way around for you?
Did you plan on torturing me because I wasn’t one?

Someday there will come a day you’ll face the judge.
The one that someday all of us will meet.
Will you stand and take the punishment he gives to you?
Or will you fall down and grovel at his feet?

Will you ask him not to torture you while you cry out?
Will you beg him not to hurt you anymore?
Will you tell him that your sorry if you made him mad
the same way that I did to you before.

This poem is about something that happened a long time ago.. I am learning to let it go.



[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-24-1999).]

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-09-24 01:55 AM


This particular brand of degenerate scum is the main reason for my hatred of men in general. Lots of hugs to you Lucie. I feel for you and feel proud of you for keeping your humor intact.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-24 10:39 AM


Lucie....my heart goes out to you, no one should have to deal with that. In turn, I am glad to hear you say that you are letting go...only by letting go of the past can we move on to the future. My prayers and thoughts are with you.
Hugs
Ruth

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-26 11:36 AM


Very sad, indeed. My heart goes out to you and everyone else who has had to experience this horrible circumstance. People don't realize, for the most part, how this colors a persons perspective in every area of their life. (I personally did not experience this, but I know others who have and it is truly heartbreaking.) My thoughts and prayers are with you.

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Denise

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
4 posted 1999-09-26 05:09 PM


Lucie: Talking it out can often scare the ghosts away, not always but I find it does help..

HUGS sweetheart

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-09-26 05:45 PM


OH Lucy, I am sorry to know you have gone through such a tramatic experience. I am glad to see that you trying to let go. You are a really strong person. You can take it to the bank dear, God knows what has happened, and he surely will answer for it! God bless you sweetie, in my prayers!
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