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0 posted 09-24-1999 01:51 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

The bitter taste of lust in your kiss chokes me.
The vileness of your desire makes me sick.
The only hope I have before I turn emotion off
is that tonight for once that you will make it quick.

I can not stand the knowing way you look at me.
I dream of someday hurting you just the same.
I believe that thereís a God around here somewhere.
How could he allow me to share this monsterís name.

When you looked upon my face the day that I was born,
were you glad I was a daughter and not a son?
Or perhaps it was the other way around for you?
Did you plan on torturing me because I wasnít one?

Someday there will come a day youíll face the judge.
The one that someday all of us will meet.
Will you stand and take the punishment he gives to you?
Or will you fall down and grovel at his feet?

Will you ask him not to torture you while you cry out?
Will you beg him not to hurt you anymore?
Will you tell him that your sorry if you made him mad
the same way that I did to you before.

This poem is about something that happened a long time ago.. I am learning to let it go.

[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-24-1999).]
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1 posted 09-24-1999 01:55 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This particular brand of degenerate scum is the main reason for my hatred of men in general. Lots of hugs to you Lucie. I feel for you and feel proud of you for keeping your humor intact.

Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.

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2 posted 09-24-1999 10:39 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn heart goes out to you, no one should have to deal with that. In turn, I am glad to hear you say that you are letting go...only by letting go of the past can we move on to the future. My prayers and thoughts are with you.

Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
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3 posted 09-26-1999 11:36 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, indeed. My heart goes out to you and everyone else who has had to experience this horrible circumstance. People don't realize, for the most part, how this colors a persons perspective in every area of their life. (I personally did not experience this, but I know others who have and it is truly heartbreaking.) My thoughts and prayers are with you.

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4 posted 09-26-1999 05:09 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Lucie: Talking it out can often scare the ghosts away, not always but I find it does help..

HUGS sweetheart

You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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5 posted 09-26-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

OH Lucy, I am sorry to know you have gone through such a tramatic experience. I am glad to see that you trying to let go. You are a really strong person. You can take it to the bank dear, God knows what has happened, and he surely will answer for it! God bless you sweetie, in my prayers!
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