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We Hide Within Our Words

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Poet deVine
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0 posted 09-24-1999 01:40 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine


Sometimes we hide within our words
a pain that screams for release
hoping that someone will see
and offer our soul some peace

Simply put a rhyme or verse
can a complicated thought impart
finding the key to the puzzle
can heal a wounded heart.

Read well my poems, brother
but heed well my words, my friend
do not trust the beginning
until you’ve read the end.
© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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1 posted 09-24-1999 01:59 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I loved this deVine.. your words speak volumes.
Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-24-1999 02:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Poet, this is terrific love it, do not trust the beginning until you've read the end, loved that part especially. Well Done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


3 posted 09-24-1999 02:28 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

LOL...
taking this at face value, too true! Often I have thought a poem was leading somewhere, only to find it travelling elsewhere!
Digging a little deeper, perhaps an analogy of life. You never know about life until it is over... it can always surprise you!
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 09-24-1999 04:17 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

So true...

Hugs

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

DreamEvil
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5 posted 09-24-1999 04:36 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Another pearl of wisdom from you Lady deVine that, of course, makes for an awesome read. This likes me much, your philosophical bent that is.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

WhtDove
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6 posted 09-24-1999 08:20 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

So true PDV! Powerful message here!
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 09-24-1999 10:25 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done and oh so true!!!

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
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on the threshold of a dream


8 posted 09-24-1999 10:27 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, PDV!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 09-24-1999 10:59 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PVD,
I liked the bend in the end.
Julie
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10 posted 09-24-1999 05:02 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

My feelings exactly. Well versed!

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Isis
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11 posted 09-24-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You hit the nail right on the head with that one! Well done!:

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue oce


12 posted 09-24-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Deb Lynne   Email Deb Lynne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deb Lynne

You've done it again! Bravo my friend!
Nan
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13 posted 09-24-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

How interesting that we both wrote about the reality of our words today....ya think???
Alwye
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In the space between moments


14 posted 09-25-1999 12:41 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Ah, so very true, Miss deVine...wonderful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

 
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