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Christopher
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0 posted 09-24-1999 12:54 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher




Yearning, I desire, my Phantom afar.
Nightly I seek, for the words of my star.
Obstinate, yes. I ask of her no less.
Her mind understanding, times I digress.
Always in my heart, she stays on my mind.
My only true hope, is payback in kind.
A voice my soul knows and never forgets.
Long are the days, hours passing in fits.
Missing her nightly, it tortures my soul.
Alone without her, the world seems so dull.
Knowing that someday, she'll come make me whole.
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-24-1999 01:07 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

No matter how this is read, it's a wonderful poem and a tribute to someone very special.. She has to be to have your love.
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2 posted 09-24-1999 01:16 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My friend, you are one lovesick puppy.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

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3 posted 09-24-1999 01:18 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

DE isn't that like the pot calling the kettle black? Look at yourself!!!!!
Nicole
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4 posted 09-24-1999 09:45 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Christopher...?? what is this??...
lol j/k my friend
Simply lovely!
He's been bitten bitten bitten, by the 'lil love bug!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-24-1999 09:50 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Christopher....I can definately relate...and don't let that Dream guy hastle you, he's been love sick longer than you

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-24-1999 10:13 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Christopher,
It won't be the last time I'm pretty sure.
I would say from the sound of the poem you are fairly young. Enjoyed the read.
Christopher
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7 posted 09-24-1999 11:04 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

LOL!
Thank you all!
DE- Thwpppt! Neener-neener!
Sey- Maybe just young at heart. This poem sounds a certain way, because I wanted to do a "certain" something with it! Thank you though... I think!

[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 09-24-1999).]
Beki
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8 posted 09-24-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

I can really relate to alonging like this Christopher. "A voice my soul knows and never forgets." I have long been searching for that voice......:-)
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9 posted 09-24-1999 03:54 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, Christopher... and LOL @ the neener-neener for DE! *G*
WhtDove
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10 posted 09-24-1999 04:30 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

You guys ought to get bitten more often. lol
I like the things you write when your in love. LOL...it's amazing to watch you 3 turn flip side from your normal writing. Very good!
Christopher
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11 posted 09-25-1999 01:33 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Thank you girls!
And yes dove, it is...well different!
I'm working real hard on trying to get back into the "old" swing of things...but can't seem to clear my mind of this beautiful voice in my head...
Sigh
Michael
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12 posted 09-25-1999 01:47 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Indeed, Christopher,
We stand in a very similiar situation.
Hold her close in heart and dream till, indeed, you're holding her.

Michael
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I'm with WhtDove on this! You guys are all "glowing" like you're pregnant or something !! It's absolutely wonderful seeing you guys all sappy ! I love it, as I cherish you all....*** curtsies

Michael has made me "glow" too, although I'm absolutely Positive I am NOT pregnant !!! LOL Hard to get that way 2000 miles away....read his newest to me....it's outstanding...

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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14 posted 09-26-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

payback in kind - of course. I have a greater (I win...!) hope of course, one to do with sight and touch. This is exquisite, this is precious, this is understood and held dear.
Marilyn
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The feeling was wonderful in this. I congratulate you on finding someone that can make you feel this way. I am envious. lol.
Christopher
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16 posted 09-26-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Thank you Michael and PFF, when I write of how I feel, I do so knowing that I may very well be echoing the feelings of others here, including you two, DE and one~voice, as well as many others!

K- I am so very glad you understood it, as I am sure none other would!

Marilyn-and envious you should be, but you can't have her, she's mine! LOL
JTF
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17 posted 09-27-1999 04:31 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Very well written Christopher ... Great one !
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