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Susan K.Rowse
New Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 2
Savannah, Georgia

0 posted 1999-09-24 12:25 PM


In the solace of an evening
On a street lined with oaks
Blonde follicles that liven
Movements that provoke
Eyes that bounce...in their sockets
Sparks that fly...Retro Rockets
Phosphorous of fireflies glimmer
Loop and dodge...dimmer,dimmer
Pacing steps with each pant
Legs high steppin...thighs that dance
Baying Basset...chasing sparks
Lightening insects in the dark
Nighthawk squeals his dining call
Breasts are dancing...bouncing balls
Licking flashes fly through night
Steppin faster....sweat that fights
Paces toying... wounds to heal
Memories chasing thoughts..until
Exasperated female wiles
Court each one and gently files
Away the pains then, catches up
With lanterned bugs and long eared pups
Marsh that beckons...teasing pains
Tears to lick and smiles to gain
Night path moves within her steps
Quickened grounds that give in...depth
Each new step completes the pace
Moods swing yonder...saving grace
Stars upon her shoulder there
Dancing Congas in her hair
Flecks upon each hollow spot
Dots of lightening skip and hop
Reeds that live each shouldered life
High-top joggin...slicing night
Quiet is broken til next time
Step on a dollar...give in a dime
Ounces of lovin..pounding away
Echoed hearts...another day

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B'fhearr Gaidhlig briste na Beurlacliste
To gain that which is worth having,it may be necessary to lose everything else.

© Copyright 1999 Susan K.Rowse - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-09-24 06:34 PM


Susan.....a lovely picture you have painted here.....I will be eagerly looking for more of your work.....Welcome to Passions

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-09-24 06:54 PM


Ditto to all Pepper said, I shall to, shall be eagerly awaiting your next piece..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
3 posted 1999-09-24 07:03 PM


You really appealed to my senses on this
one Susan. Looking foward to seeing more.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




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