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Lorelei
Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 23
Philadelphia, PA

0 posted 1999-09-23 11:36 PM



breath of divine life
whispers through my ear
wisping me away, without
a care, never to return.

high above the rest, someone
knows who you are inside,
leave them, soon they will know
and breathe the breath of divine life.

hold it closed, not a sound, nor
anything to prove this is life.
we are machines, our breath is false,
this is all a dream.

how do we know what is real
when this is just a dream?
as i fall to the ground, i awaken and
breathe the breath of divine life.

© Copyright 1999 Lorelei - All Rights Reserved
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-09-24 05:18 PM


Sometimes life does seem a little unreal.
I often wonder too.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




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