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ThUnDeRkYsS
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Wisconsin


0 posted 09-23-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Sometimes I wonder
how people cant try
to hurt you so badly
and make your heart cry

what pleasure is in it
what drives them to be
so empty and hateful
towards people in need

the pain and aloneness
these people must feel
how could someone do this
how could it be real

theres so much to offer
theres so much to give
in this life we're granted
to cherish and live

everyone feels
and everyone cries
everyone lives
and everyone dies

life doesnt have to be
empty and cold
the days and nights warmer
with someone to hold

our life's what we make it
so give it your all
dont ever give up
and you'll never fall

[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-23-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
StuffN
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since 09-23-1999
Posts 7
USA


1 posted 09-24-1999 05:20 AM       View Profile for StuffN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StuffN

:* .flesruoy sa nam citnamor ,gnimrahc a teem t'nac I dab oot dnA .ecivda ruoy ekat t'nac elpoep emos dab ooT .krow fo eceip lufituaeb a saw sihT
ThUnDeRkYsS
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Posts 739
Wisconsin


2 posted 09-24-1999 06:09 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

*; em teem ot nottub "SsYkReDnUhT liame" eht no kcilC stnemmoc ecin ruoy rof uoy knaht

[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-24-1999).]
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 09-24-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I liked your poem, but will I have to hold my computer monitor up to a mirror to read your replies? Ok..hold on...

rorrim taht dna nur em tel
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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4 posted 09-24-1999 11:13 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

won thgir etirw I nac meop siht dekil yllaer I

Ah...this is better...good work and what's with the mirror image?

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
ThUnDeRkYsS
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Wisconsin


5 posted 09-24-1999 01:29 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Thank you for your kind replies, hoot_owl_rn and Poet deVine I appreciate your input greatly. Sorry about the backwards writing... Sort of a little thing my friend StuffN and I have We are both new to this site, and love it lots.

[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-24-1999).]
 
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