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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-23-1999 11:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

So be it

She saddles me like a willing horse
And digs her spurs into my sides
She screams commands till she is hoarse
I groan each time she mounts and rides.

There was a time when love was new
I felt we were the same, of course.
But as time passed, I finally knew
That she was rider- I the horse.

Today we go along our way
Until death or at least divorce
The Grande Dame proudly on display
Aboard her tired beaten horse.
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1 posted 09-23-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Feeling unappreciated, are we..?

My horse used to bite me when I pissed her off ... have you tried that? If nothing else it should make things interesting ...

Seriously, though, good verse as usual, Seymour.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-24-1999 08:40 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nochtdraco,
Well everybody has a different twist, thanks for the read and comment.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-24-1999 10:58 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ouch...I hope she at least cools you down and brushes you after the ride
Seriously, this was well written, I like the symbolism in it

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-24-1999 05:35 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
Not even that. thanks for the read and comment.
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Another great one, Seymour!

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Michael
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6 posted 09-25-1999 01:57 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

LOL
Well you still have some kick to ya, Sy -
She hasn't rode you into the ground yet.
Thanks for the laugh.

Michael
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 09-25-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael,
One laugh is all I needed,
thank you for that.
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8 posted 11-27-2007 02:10 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Oh you make my laugh - now where is that tribute to this horse rider anyway?  I will find it.
 
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