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Blue
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0 posted 09-23-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue


that's not the look you gave me yesterday
filled with such strong love and real bravery
before I drove your sweet spirit away
and scattered your soul to the open sea
I already miss
when your eyes did not see
the curse that's my kiss
this cruelness that is me
unintentional yes
I hurt everyone still
pulled you into my mess
turned your beauty so ill
and now I only wish to restore
your trust and your faith and your love
revert to innocence of before
keep far from this fire breathing dove
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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 09-24-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Very interesting blue... you just happened to write about one of my favorite topics...
I would like to see, if you don't mind, an expansion of this, telling of the lasting impact your guilt has on your life, and whether or not it will allow you do repeat the same actions.
Well done!
Sad, but well done.
 
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