Glen Hope, PA USA
Lelly.....this most certainly DOES NOT SUCK. It is a very gripping piece of poetry and so true of todays world. Children have no choice as to what they are born into, be it famine, war, abuse...you have done an excellent job in portraying that thought in this piece and I like the way you have written this...the rhthym and rhyme work well and it flows smoothly. Nice job and welcome to the group!!!
Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.
Thank you all for leaving footprints!!