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The Life of Christ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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I have seen the angels rejoice my mothers love Kings bow down shepherds believe wrathful rulers saving grace. I have seen my fathers will. I have seen Lazarus brought back a breaking heart thousands fed a blind man see a deaf man hear a lame man walk. I have seen the waters calmed. I have seen angered sneers mocking soldiers. ashamed disciples a faithful thief my body broken my blood taken. I have seen the dusk. I have seen the stone rolled away doubting eyes believing humbleness. I have seen the dawn. And through all of this my child, I saw you. Angela Erin Burke ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
some one read me! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
some one read me please! |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
wow im not much into religious poems but i must say thats fantastic and beautiful your quite a poet,better than me at the least. ------------------ |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I love spiritual poems, you could feel the words of Christ coming thru...nice job. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I agree with Julie, it was like Christ was talking to me personally. Great job!!: ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, I love it  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This poem is lovely - Why not consider posting it on the main site, in the spiritual section - It's deserving of a permanent spot there... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Nan, if you would tell me how, i'd be glad to! ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very good Sax! Very biblical, very true. You did a wonderful job, through the eyes of Christ. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done! And with such a great and needed message! ------------------ Denise |
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