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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-23 07:43 PM



The Better Days

The better days have past me by,
leaving me alone to sit and cry.
People and time move to fast,
leaving me behind in the past.
All the memories have become a blur,
seeming like they never were.
Thoughts I had, mistakes I made,
are now things that leave me so afraid.
But those days I will always remember,
especially the month of September.
Because that was when he made me cry,
as he said his final good-bye.

© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-09-24 04:27 PM


How sad...well written. It's hard to
say good-bye.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




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