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What Your Love Does To Me

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-23-1999 05:35 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My dead heart begins to beat with new life.
This glacial coldness of soul your touch melts.
Your one voice parts my sadness like a knife.
Silken sound wraps me in the softest felts.

My rage transforms into passion for you.
Your words weave wonders across jaded eyes.
Cupid's arrow has pierced my heart clean through.
With true love my new life you did baptize.

My nerves tingle and burn with your pleasure.
My living heart beats in time to your song.
Of true love you are the surest measure.
You helped me to see where my life went wrong.

My pulse races when we talk on the phone.
For you no longer is my heart a stone.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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Lucie
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1 posted 09-23-1999 05:37 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I love this.. I am so glad you have found someone to make you feel this way!
Michael
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2 posted 09-23-1999 05:46 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

You're a very lucky man, DreamEvil.
You have many, many gifts.

Michael
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3 posted 09-23-1999 05:52 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wow.....that could basically describe the process of me falling in love...great poem
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4 posted 09-23-1999 06:53 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline



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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Alwye
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5 posted 09-23-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I agree with Michael. You are truly gifted, my friend. I'm so glad you've found some happiness. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-23-1999 11:01 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
Your poetry is powerful happy or sad.
Excellent.
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7 posted 09-24-1999 12:52 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher


A "voice" can do wonders can it not friend?
DreamEvil
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8 posted 09-24-1999 04:43 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I am indeed lucky, I see that now. Whether it becomes a trend remains to be seen. Thank you all much.

True Christopher, but only one voice in particular.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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