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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-23 10:58 AM


damn this noise inside my head
it tells me of regret
and undenialable dread
in the end it will have me
dead
it rises now when you pass by
i can not stare
im so unafraid
for all the power you gave
you still kill me a little more
i do so dislike open doors
they invite worries
and flurries of flight
now it is swelling
God hide me in your light



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roxane
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
1 posted 1999-09-23 11:20 PM


you know what? i have a fear of windows that sort of reminds me of the lines about the open doors. it's just so horrible to let the sun come in on tears and then taunt you. i don't know why. i really liked this poem, but then again, i've liked all your poems.

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