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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-23-1999 10:58 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

damn this noise inside my head
it tells me of regret
and undenialable dread
in the end it will have me
dead
it rises now when you pass by
i can not stare
im so unafraid
for all the power you gave
you still kill me a little more
i do so dislike open doors
they invite worries
and flurries of flight
now it is swelling
God hide me in your light



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1 posted 09-23-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for roxane   Email roxane   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for roxane

you know what? i have a fear of windows that sort of reminds me of the lines about the open doors. it's just so horrible to let the sun come in on tears and then taunt you. i don't know why. i really liked this poem, but then again, i've liked all your poems.
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