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Newguy
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since 06-27-99
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0 posted 09-23-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for Newguy   Email Newguy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Newguy

Many Things

So many things I want to say;
Each time I am thrown to yet another day.
I want to declare that my love for you,
Is holy, pure, ever so true,
These things, however, you already knew
When you ran, you laughed, you said we were through.
So now I sit, write my humble thoughts,
They are all I have left, though I feel they're for naught.
We all want a love, we all want a chance,
We all want friends, we all want romance.
Now most all of these things died with you
As I always expected, as I always knew.
So thus I write, I author, I pen,
These words, hopeing I'll be granted those prizes again.

This is a basic poem I wrote one day under sever emotinal distress. So please don't kill it too bad

-Keith
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kk
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since 09-16-99
Posts 14


1 posted 09-23-1999 09:59 AM       View Profile for kk   Email kk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kk

It great!! I can definitely relate to this one........I think I'll steal it from ya! j/k!!!

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True Love leaves heartprints on the Soul
Iloveit
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2 posted 09-23-1999 10:26 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yes I can feel the distress, hope it is better today, but the poem is well written, and about a subject that I can relate to also....good job
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