How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #2 Archive
 No End
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

No End

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Steelbird
New Member
since 09-23-1999
Posts 2


0 posted 09-23-1999 02:32 AM       View Profile for Steelbird   Email Steelbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Steelbird

You once were mine , our love was true
like a rose kissed by the dew.

Just what went wrong, I cannot say
But another one took you away.

Although it hurts, I wonder why
A love so sweet just had to die.

I must move on though filled with grief
to sit and cry brings no relief.

It hurts so bad to feel this way
I'll hide my tears and walk away.

And tell myself, You've got to try
but I can't tell my love Goodbye.
© Copyright 1999 Steelbird - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 08-02-99
Posts 9130
Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 09-23-1999 02:33 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Poignant and moving in its simplicity.
Bravo and welcome!
Julie
Senior Member
since 08-20-99
Posts 742
Houston, TX


2 posted 09-23-1999 02:36 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Well written, I especially liked "like
a rose kissed by the dew;"


------------------
Julie
-------------------------
..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


Steelbird
New Member
since 09-23-1999
Posts 2


3 posted 09-23-1999 03:05 AM       View Profile for Steelbird   Email Steelbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Steelbird

Thanks Julie. I appreciate your encouragement.I wrote this for an internet friend who lost her son in a car accident recently.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 09-23-1999 03:26 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sad , but well written
Steelbird will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #2 >> No End Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors