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emptiness

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Blue
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since 07-03-99
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Florida


0 posted 09-23-1999 12:06 AM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

close myself in my little box
secluded inside with my pain
you close your eyes to what I feel
craved isolation I obtain
sometimes what I think I want
just hurts me ten times worse
when I wanted you to leave
I strengthened my own curse
now here without you I feel strong
but empty is what I am
the tears no longer freely flow
your absence my stable dam
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Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


1 posted 09-23-1999 12:18 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Oh I understand all too well!! Nice work!!
Hope to read more of your poetry!!

Welcome!!

By the way nice name!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 09-23-1999 12:22 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done...welcome to passions!!

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Blue
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3 posted 09-23-1999 06:36 AM       View Profile for Blue   Email Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue

It is not my first poem here, mine are just few and far between. Thanks for the replys!
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